第2部分 读后续写02 导入训练-【快捷英语】高考热点题型（应用文写作、读后续写与概要写作）

高考热点题型应用文写作、读后续写与概要写作高考 【思路点拨】 1.故事主线 已知线索:Mac和两个朋友骑行去阿拉斯加,一个朋友的自行车坏了,另一个人留下帮忙,他们鼓励 Mac一个人先往前骑行。就在Mac独自前行过程中突然跑出一匹狼紧追不舍,Mac用了防熊喷雾但没有 太大作用。狼和人的距离越来越近……;Pau和 Becky开车路过,看到了这一幕 可续写线索 失望?坚信?曲折?自救?获救? 2.续写词汇 已经给出词汇:Mac, friends, bicycle, pedaled,home,wolf, jumped,cars, climb和Paul 与话题有关的拓展词汇:动作类:jump,wave,kick, hit beat, strike,hug,bite, shout, scream,rush,hury 情感类词汇: frightened, fiercely, madly,, crazily., burst into tears, burst out crying, thankful, grateful, gratitude。 【高分范文】 Paragraph 1 The car suddenly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf back off, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac's bicycle as if it were a kill. Soon after, the animal ran off. Paragraph 2 Several minutes later; his two friends arrived. Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends. " It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die, said Mac in a trembling voice, with tears gathering in his eyes. For him, life could never be more valuable. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with countless gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate again 1.本篇读后续写合理地对故事进行了续写,利用了提示句的内容进行了大胆的想象,同时将提示词 巧妙地融入到了两段的故事中,不着痕迹。 2.本篇续写文章使用了大量的高级句型,如 before引导的时间状语从句、asif引导的方式状语从 句。同时本篇续写使用了很多非谓语动词,如 seeing the wolf back ofi, shutting the door behind him heavily, standing over, after saying goodbye to以及 agreeing never to separate again,并且还运用了 with tears gathering in his eyes这个with的复合结构。这些形式的运用使整篇文章具有了动作感,使故事栩栩如生。 导入洲练 Passage 1 ◎题材:情感情绪体裁:记叙文词数:260难度:d建议用时:20分钟 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事 A Friend in Need Is a friend Indeed Myna was flying home one evening. After a lot of efforts she had finally found a delicious worm. It was late