第1部分 应用文写作03 导入训练-【快捷英语】高考热点题型（应用文写作、读后续写与概要写作）

高考热点题型应用文写作、读后续写与概要写作高考 2.确定时态和人称:时态以一般将来时为主,人称以第一人称为主。 3.确定内容要点:周五晚上在杭州火车站接Tony,入住预订的酒店;周六参观杭州名胜;周日在家里 活动。嘱咐冬季寒冷,多备衣物。 4.确定文章结构:基本维持三段结构。第一段主要引入主题;第二段介绍行程的安排;第三段客气结 束语。 【学生习作】 Dear Tony, I'm glad to know you will come to Hangzhou for a two-day visit I will meet you at Hangzhou Station this Friday evening and then go to the hotel where you book in advance On Saturday, we will visit some places of interest in Hangzhou, that is famous for West Lake. We will do some activities on Sunday at my house I remind you that you must take some clothes in case of cold winter Looking forward to seeing you Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【习作评析 本文涵盖了所有内容要点,意思基本表述完整。作者在写作的过程中,注意了长短句的运用,同时 也使用了较复杂的句式,但是文章仍然有不足之处。 1.尝试使用复杂句型造成的语法错误突显语法知识储备不足,如 the hotel where you book in advance 中的 where的误用,应为 which; that is famous for West Lake中that的错用,应为 which引导非限制性定 语从句。 2.个别语句生硬,属于不地道的英语表达,如 do some activities on Sunday at my house虽然语法结构 没有错误,但是表意不佳。 3.有些语句生硬,与信件需要礼貌、委婉用语的要求不符,如 I remind you略显突兀、生硬。 【满分作文】 Dear Tony, I am glad to receive your letter and know that you will come to Hangzhou this weekend. Here are the arrangements for your two-day visit I will meet at Hangzhou Railway Station this Friday evening and then head to the hotel. After a good nights sleep, we are to visit one of the attractions in Hangzhou. As a tourist city with more than 4,000 years of history, Hangzhou offers so many sights for you to choose from On Sunday you will meet my family and you can learn to make dumplings if you like. Be sure to bring some extra clothes to keep yourself warm since it's colder here Cant wait to see you Yours sincerely, Li Hua 高考热点题型应用文写作、读后续写与概要写作高考 【满分作文】 Dear sir or madam I'm Li hua, a middle school student from China. I read about your announcement of the 17th International Future Business Leader Summit which was posted on the Internet. I'm writing to apply for an opportunity to join in it. Ten years of English learning enables me to have a good command of this language. What's more, I can deep