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精准练习(十七) 短文改错(二)
2020·河北衡水中学联考
The reasons why I expect to studying in your university are as follows. The first thing that occur to me is its excellence in finance, which I am interested in it as my major. Varieties of strengths allow me the courage apply for admission. Firstly, good social skills and strong organizing ability are that I have acquired in high school thanks for the experience of serving as monitor. I have learned to keep the good balance between work and study. I also get the award of Outstanding Student Leader last year. Besides,I have several hobby,such as dancing, playing erhu, and playing badminton.
I will feel great honored if I can be admitted.
[分析] 本文是应用文,是一封给希望就读的大学的申请信。
第一处:studying→study [考查非谓语动词。expect to do...“期望做……”,expect后接不定式作宾语。故studying 改为study。]
第二处:occur→occurs [考查时态。全文叙述的是现在的情况,用一般现在时;that occur to me是定语从句,修饰先行词the first thing,定语从句中的谓语动词与先行词单复数一致,故occur改为occurs。]
第三处:去掉in 后的it [考查定语从句。分析句子结构,which指代定语从句的先行词finance,先行词在定语从句中不能再出现。]
第四处:courage后加to [考查非谓语动词。短语 the courage to do...“做……的勇气”,courage后接不定式作定语。故courage后加to。]
第五处:that→what [考查表语从句连接词。句意:感谢我担任班长的经历,我在高中获得了良好的社会交往能力和较强的组织能力。分析句子结构,that I have acquired是表语从句,从句中acquired后缺少宾语,因此用what引导表语从句,在从句中作宾语,意思为“……东西”。]
第六处:for→to [考查介词。短语thanks to“由于,多亏了”。]
第七处:the→a [考查冠词。短语keep a balance “保持平衡”。]
第八处:get→got [考查时态。根据时间状语last year,句子应该用一般过去时;get是不规则变化动词,过去式为got。]
第九处:hobby→hobbies [考查可数名词单复数。hobby是可数名词;前面有several,因此应该用复数形式。]
第十处:great→greatly [考查副词。修饰过去分词honored,应该用副词形式。]
2018·全国卷Ⅲ
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mis