内容正文:
精准练习(十八) 写 信
2020·广西北海一模
假定你是李华, 你的澳大利亚好友Jack对中国传统戏剧(Chinese traditional opera)很感兴趣, 请你写一封邮件给他, 邀请他参加你们学校刚成立的戏剧社团, 内容包括:
1.写邮件的目的;
2.戏剧社团活动的时间和地点;
3.戏剧社团定期开展的活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear_Jack,_
Knowing that you are rather interested in Chinese traditional opera, I am writing to invite you to join the opera club of our school set up recently.
The club begins every Friday after school, which starts from 5:30 to 7:30, lasting 2 hours. What's more, there will be regular activities for the members of the club to participate in. Some wellknown masters of Chinese traditional opera will be invited to give performances. Besides, members of the club are also encouraged to put on some performances themselves. There is much chance that you will learn a lot about Chinese traditional opera.
I do hope you will sign for it as soon as possible.
Yours_sincerely,_
Li_Hua
解析 这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。
第一步:审题。分析可知,应该以第一人称为主,一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。
第二步:列提纲。首段点题说明写信原因,中间段落描述细节要点,最后提出希望。
第三步:连词成句。
Chinese traditional opera,regular activities,participate in,put on some performances
(1)I am writing to invite you to join the opera club of our school set up recently.
(2)Some wellknown masters of Chinese traditional opera will be invited to give performances.
(3)I do hope you will sign for it as soon as possible.
第四步:连句成篇。这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。
(1)表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
(2)表并列补充关系:What