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精准练习(二十) 通知发言
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在, 他们即将回国, 你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
1.回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);
2.谈谈收获或感想;
3.表达祝愿与期望。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Dear friends,
How time flies! I am Li Jin,President of Student Union of Chenguang High School. It's my great privilege to be here,sharing my moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain. During the twoweek activities,we surely exchanged our ideas on learning,ways of life,PE and cultures. One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.
The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship. It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us. After the twoweek exchange activities,we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level. And I sincerely hope our friendship lasts forever.
Wish you all the best!
Thank you.
解析 第一步: 精准审题。第一人称,可用一般现在时, 一般过去时, 一般将来时。
第二步:列提纲,选用词。开头点题:回顾双方的交流活动,主题段落关于收获或感想,结尾表达祝愿与期望。美词:privilege,highlight,compare with,witness,enthusiasm,have a better understanding of,a whole new level.
第三步:连词成句。
(1)It's my great privilege to be here.
(2)The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship.
第四步:连句成篇,衔接过渡。
(1)表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second..., And then, Finally, In the end, At last
(2)表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only...but (also),
including
(3)表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On