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重难点06 书面表达
【命题趋势】
分析全国近几年的中考真题可知,书面表达对“观点看法类” “说明介绍类”的话题考查比重仅次于“做法建议类”,也是各地市高频考查方向。此类话题,通常在背景材料中说明某种“好/坏/新ぐ“…”的现象,或以表格或图示展示不同人群的“不同或对立”的观点,由此让学生最终陈述自己的观点,并说明理由(注意理由要有理有据、条理清晰)。
【满分技巧】
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关 写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
【热点话题】
书面表达热衷于新冠、环保、健康、传统文化等。
A(2020· 衢州衢江区中考一模)
56. 假设你是Li Dan,以下是你笔友Alex发给你的一封电子邮件,请你根据该邮件内容,用英语给Alex回一封邮件。
From: Alex
To: Li Dan
Subject: How is everything going?
Hi Li Dan,
How are you?
What a special winter holiday, isn't it? In our city, we are asked to stay at home because of the COVID-19. I feel bored of it and I hope I can go to school as usual. Are you staying at home now? How do you feel about it?
Our family doctor says it is important to take care of ourselves these days. Do you think so? What should I do? Can you give me some advice?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours.
Alex
要求:
(1)按电子邮件格式完成邮件;
(2)邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息;
(3)词数90-110。
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【答案】From: Li Dan
To: Alex
Subject: My Holiday Life
Hi Alex.
I'm glad to hear from you. I'm fine, thanks.
I have a longer winter holiday than before. It is dangerous outside, so I have to stay at home to protect myself. But life isn't boring at all. I get up at 6:30 and then I do