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精做01 写作之书面表达
一、提纲类作文
例1 假设你是晨光中学的学生李华。你所喜爱的英语杂志Teens' Space创刊五周年,在此之际,该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议,请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。内容包括:
1. 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者;
2. 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因;
3. 提出你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生,在英语杂志Teens' Space创刊五周年之际,给杂志主编写一封信,说明自己对杂志的喜爱并提出意见或建议。
【答案】Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Teens' Space!
I'm a regular reader of your magazine. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world. Second, Teens' Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me.
As a student, I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is of great benefit to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. Meanwhile, I hope Teens' Space will become better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【点睛】
[高分句型1] First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world.(so that引导状语从句及that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Second, Teens' Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] As a student, I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is of great benefit to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.(介词to接动名词作宾语,which引导的非限制性定语从句以及how引导的宾语从句)
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在进行时等。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 说明自己是该杂志的忠实读者;
2. 说明自己喜欢该杂志的原因;
3. 提出自己的建议。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
Congratulations; a regular reader; cover both national and international news; in our English learning; be helpful; the success stories; of great benefit; make the world a better place; become better and better.
第三步:连词成句
1. Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Teens' Space!
2. I'm a regular reader of your magazine.
3. First, it covers bo