层级4 第1讲 记叙文-冲刺2021年高考英语写作层级训练

第1讲　记叙文 层级四　精巧缜密的谋篇 写作分层突破 1 01 一、写人记叙文 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 02 二、叙事记叙文 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 谢谢观看 THANK YOU! 33 [谋篇布局] [亮点句式] ●夺人眼球开头句 1．Mr. Zhang played an important role in promoting my studies, which left a deep impression on me. 张老师在我提升学习成绩的过程中起着重要作用，这给我留下了深刻的印象。 2．Whenever I talk about the Dragon Boat Festival, I can't help thinking of Qu Yuan, a great patriotic poet in Chinese history. 每当谈论起端午节，我都不禁想起屈原，中国历史上一位伟大的爱国诗人。 3．Martin, whose Chinese name is Ma Lin, is our oral English teacher this term. 马丁是我们这学期的英语口语老师，他的中文名是马林。 ●亮点出彩篇中间 4．He is honest and always ready to help others. That's why we made him our monitor. 他诚实且乐于助人。所以我们选他当班长。 5．The longer he stays with us, the more popular with us he has become. 他与我们相处越久，就越受我们的欢迎。 6．Thanks to his help, I have made much progress and caught up with others. 多亏他的帮助，我取得了很大进步并赶上了其他同学。 ●韵味无穷结尾句 7．He is such a learned teacher that all of us respect him. 他是如此博学的老师，我们大家都很尊敬他。 8．Such is Mr. Li, a kind­hearted, humorous and responsible teacher. 这就是李老师，一位心地善良、幽默、有责任心的教师。 9．Looking at my grandma's pale face and white hair, I was close to tears. 看着奶奶苍白的面庞和满头白发，我眼泪都快掉下来了。 [佳作背诵] (2020·全国卷Ⅰ)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1．人物简介； 2．尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us._________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ The person I respect There are many respectable people around us.As for me, my English teacher，Ms Li，is the person I respect most.Though she has been teaching English for twenty years，she is still passionate about teaching.She always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting.Hard­working and knowledgeable，she is one of the best teachers in our