层级3 第1讲 添加合理的细节-冲刺2021年高考英语写作层级训练

第1讲　添加合理的细节 层级三　充实流畅的行文 写作分层突破 1 01 身手初试 2 and more people are not paying attention to face­to­face communication For example, more 3 I was full of great pride and confidence thus making English learning more interesting 4 If possible so that I can know more about today's society To my joy, they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me 5 try to make more contributions to the protection of the environment 6 02 知识必备 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 03 技能落实 16 this ability, you can communicate with native speakers easily and have With access to many resources 17 The sooner you get used to it, the more beneficial it will become to you You are supposed to choose a major that you like 18 overcom eall the difficulties and make great progress in China I believe you can 19 谢谢观看 THANK YOU! 20 根据括号内的提示完成下列句子。 1．However, it seems that people are not aware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication between people. ________________ ____________________________________________________________ (比如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流)． 2．At that moment, I became the focus of the whole class and ____________________________________ (我充满了自豪和自信)． 3．I suggest that the teacher select proper English films for us, _________________________________________(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加有趣)． 4．____________(如果可能的话), I'll take part in some social activities _______________________________________________(以便我能更多地了解当今社会)． 5．I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. __________________________________________________ _____________ (令我高兴的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高)． 6．Let's develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and ___________________________________________________________(尽力为环境保护做出更多贡献)． 在高考试题的书面表达的“注意”中明确要求：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。适当添加细节的方法具体如下： 1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明 ①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。 I'll spend some time staying with my parents. →I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them besides doing some housework. ②我看到了一些不良行为。 I found some bad behaviour. →I found some bad