内容正文:
Unit 4 Li Ming Comes Home
JJ 六年级下册
四步法描述
过生日的情景
题目:你的生日是什么时候?去年你和谁一起过的生日?你们玩得开心吗?快来和大家一起分享吧。词数60左右。
四步法描述房子
第一步,构思。属于人物活动描写,采用总—分—总的结构,先整体介绍①:我叫……,我在……举办了一个聚会;然后介绍活动的具体情况;最后总结活动的效果。
第二步,知识储备。
1.必备词汇:birthday party(生日聚会), invite...to... (邀请……去……),buy ...for... (为……买……),take pictures(照相),remember(记着)
2.句型:主语+动词过去式+其他
第三步,连词成句,连句成篇,再注意时态。根据上面的必备词汇及句型连词成句,连句成篇。本文描述的是之前过生日的情况,应用一般过去时。
第四步,通读检查。注意拼写及语法的错误。
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Hello! My name is Bob.① I had a birthday party in my house last September 15th.①I invited many friends to come to my home. My mother bought a birthday cake for me. Before we ate it, we sang a birthday song. Then we had a big dinner. We took many pictures to remember the day.② We were very happy that day.③
范文:
小练笔:
我是李强,去年的6月21日我们全家人一起为我举办了一个生日聚会。妈妈、爸爸和哥哥都为我的生日献出了爱心。饭后我们还去公园玩了。我们全家人都很高兴。
I am Li Qiang. My family had a birthday party for me last June 21st.Mum cooked delicious food for us. Dad made a big birthday cake for me. My brother gave me a T-shirt. We sang the birthday song