内容正文:
题号押题11
全国卷第72题:书面表达(电子邮件)
〖真题回顾〗
Passage 1(2019•全国卷ⅠI•书面表达)
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:
1.比赛信息;
2.赛前准备;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
内容分析
文体
告知信
告知人
排球队队长
告知对象
排球队队友
告知主题
校排球队比赛
告知内容
比赛信息;
赛前准备;
表达期待。
问候语及开头语
I’m writing to you about ... / I’m writing to tell you something about ...
事件信息
事件信息的三要素:时间、地点、人物
(以本篇短文为例)
时间:on July 8th
地点:in the school gym
人物:our volleyball team and a team from Lingnan High School
事件的时间和地点的常用表达:
There will be a match to be held in …
The exhibition will be held in / take place in …
The contest is organized by our school on …
Our school will hold a music festival on …
个人发挥
适当增加相关细节
语言分析
话题词汇激活
体育:volleyball, football, baseball, badminton, cycling, athlete, coach, competitor, gym, stadium, beat, defeat, compete, break / hold the record, goal, match, race, score, victory, win, player, team member
学校生活:after-school activities, take part in, attend, activity, participation, the students’ union
(在平时的学习中要注意话题词汇的积累)
运用高级词块
如:take place, play against, get fully prepared, in addition, keep fit等
运用高级句式
如:宾语从句,现在分词作状语等
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday