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-二、邀请信 〈必背范文1 全国卷Ⅱ 假定你是李华,计划和同学去养老院( nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节( the double ninth Festival。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括 1.出发及返回时间;2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。 注意 1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结语已为你写好。 Looking forward to your reply Yours Li Hua 〈套用模板的满分作文 Dear Lucy - I am Li Hua. I would be more than pleased to invite you to oin us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double ninth festival Here are some details about this activity: To beain with we will leave our school bu bus at 8: 00a. m and return at 5: 00 p. m. Besides, we'l make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people. in addition, we lt spend some fun time together singing, dancing and platina games, which will be megnrnatul and interesting. We sincerely hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. We would appreciate it veru much if uou could accept our invitation. Looking forward to your reply. Yours -Li Hua (名师点评 1.文章用邀请信格式正确,结构合理。 文章运用三段,开头直入主题,没有任何赘词,重点突出,收束有力。 3.套用模板成文(57个词,用绿色字标注),较多地运用高级句型是本文的亮点。 : We'll spend some, un time…, which will be…,(非限制性定语从句); We sincerely hope is convenient for you.(条件状语从句); We would appreciate it very much if you could accept our invitation.(条件状语从句)。 to Xiaoming, who is the star at the party. Besides, we will share the delicious birthday cake which is prepared by mu classmates In addition, we are going to play games at the party. Of course, whoever attends the partu is supposed to bring a little present to Xiaoming. You are so excellent an English teacher, and we sincerety hope you can be present at the party if it is convenient for you. We would appreciate it veru much if uou could accept our invitation. Im looking forward to meeting you and I wish you a happu time. Yours, Li hug- (名师点评 本篇习作结构清晰、言简意赅,能够准确地表述文章的內容要点。作者语言运用地 道、得体,连接词 Firstσfαl, Besides, In addition等的使用使得行文条理有序、结构紧凑、 行文流畅自然。同时,主语从句和条件状语从句的交错使用,使文章错落有致、跌宕生 姿、富有变化,读起来朗朗上口。