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of 6.19 million. It is a beautifut place with pleasant weather and rich culture resources. On the one hand, Kunming has a good transport network, so it is very convenient for people to travel On the other hand, there are alot of tourism sites where visitors can not only enjoy the wonderful scenery but also taste kinds of delicious food a Welcome to Kunming. I'm looking forward to your coming I'll be pleased to become tour quide -Yours, -Li Hug 〈名师点评 本文按照“十句作文法”套用模板成文,段落设置合理,框架匠心独具。文章要点 整、思路清晰、选词准确、句式灵活。高级句式 As is well- known toα,Kuig, which lies 为文章增添了亮点。连接词 On the one hand, On the other hand的运用再为文章锦上添花, 全文结构清晰、层次分明,彰显了作者超越一般考生的语言驾驭能力。 dinner. After that they eat moon cakes, which stands for the spirit of the festival, unity. Weather permitting, they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight. It is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people. Welcome to China. I wish you a pleasant journey and Im sure you will like our traditional Mid-Autumn Day. -Yours. Li hug (名师点评 全文套用模板成文,灵活而不拘泥。同时,作者能把课文所学精准地运用在自己的 写作中,足以证明作者平时语言积累细致、扎实。此外,本文选词讲究,高级词汇 lunar calendar, get together, stand for, weather permitting, wish you a pleasant journey等的使用,充分 展示了作者深厚的文化功底和高超的写作技巧。