内容正文:
高中英语新高考-英语作文:英语写作的简单逻辑的分析和表达
写作的传授重点是:简单逻辑的分析和表达。
授课目标:
1、如何分析要点之间的逻辑
2、如何写好句子
3、总结写作中的各种错误
题目
假定你校学生会近期就“互联网对学生学习的影响”这一问题展开校园调查。请你根据下图的调查结果写一份调查报告,并针对学生上网学习给出合理的建议,发表在校英文报上。
注意:1. 词数120左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Recently, the student union conducted a survey on the influence of the Internet on studying.
写作过程
写作步骤:
1、列要点
2、加工要点,分析其中的逻辑
3、写句子,润色
1.上网找资料很方便,互联网对学习有益
列要点:surf the internet; find information; convenient; be good to
逻辑:surf the internet; find information; (so) convenient; be good to
或者:convenient; be good to; (because, for example) convenient; be good to
措辞:
convenient: it is convenient for sb to do…
surf the internet; find informationsurf the internet for information
合并:The Internet can benefit us in many ways. For example, it is convenient for us to surf the internet for information.
多少人认为:
about 45% of the students think / argue / hold that…
最后成句:
About 35% of the students think / argue / hold that the Internet can benefit us in many ways. For example, it is convenient for us