内容正文:
高中英语新高考-英语作文:热点话题指导与解读:意见分歧、教育
作文不常写,写作技能就会生疏,这是必然的。但是每次写一定要有所突破,才会有效,其中一个好方法就是把别人的好作文的好文笔内化为己有。下面这篇文字用到了很多高级词块,个别是四级常用词汇,相信对成绩非常好的读者也会有用。我一贯主张,先广泛阅读大量的同类话题作文,然后下笔,调用自己的思维,用上积累的词块。
欢迎大家提出更好的写法建议。非常感谢。
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题目:
在我们合作的过程中,经常小组里出现不同的声音,如何看待不同的声音并且取得一致的声音。
写作过程:
首段导入:说明分歧的坏处:破坏合作和孤立成员
(话题导入+解释说明结果+明确立场)
Nowadays, along with people from different backgrounds comemany conflicts in a community, which, if not handled properly, may threaten cooperation. (这个句子比较复杂的,主句是倒装句,定语从句里含有状语从句的省略结构,属于:现象+结果的思维模式) For example, it makes members gradually lose support and isolate themselves. (对前面的threat继续解释)Therefore,great efforts should be made to achieve a universal voice.(最后提出观点)
中间段:解释立场,说明消除分歧争取统一的声音的好处
First, it can help achieve high working efficiency. Obviously, a group where all members unite as one is usually full of passion and strength. Otherwise, a lot of time will be spent convincing each other. (展开方式:主题句+解释+反向说明) Second, it contributes to a friendly environment in which everyone can work with a