35分写作规范练（五）-2020高考英语【试吧大考卷】二轮复习专项分层特训卷

35分写作规范练(五) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 [2019·豫南九校联考]My grandmother is 73 year old. She is a great reader, but she reads only newspapers. He has a very good habit of reading the newspaper daily. After her morning housework, she sat down to read the newspaper for at least an hour. She doesn't like to be disturbing at that time. In fact she is so much updated that everyone else in the house relies her for the daily important news, national or international. My grandmother's habit of reading newspapers are a great help for other members of my house, especial my parents. As they both are working very hardly, they have very few time to read the news. 答案与解析： My grandmother is 73 o( at that time. In fact she is so down to read the newspaper for at least an hour. She doesn't like to be has a very good habit of reading the newspaper daily. After her morning housework, she old. She is a great reader, but she reads only newspapers. ,\s\do10(④)) updated that everyone else in the house relies time to read the news. , they have very my parents. As they both are working very a great help for other members of my house, her for the daily important news, national or international. My grandmother's habit of reading newspapers ①year改为years　year作“岁”讲时为可数名词，此前有数词73修饰，应用复数形式，故将year改为years。②He改为She　此处代指grandmother，应用代词She，故将He改为She。 ③sat改为sits　综观全文可知，本文主要介绍的是一般情况，应用一般现在时，故将sat改为sits。 ④disturbing改为disturbed　disturb与其逻辑主语She之间为被动关系，应用被动形式，故将disturbing改为disturbed。 ⑤删除much　“so＋adj./adv.＋that...”为固定搭配，意为“如此……以至于……”，且much常用于修饰形容词的比较级或不可数名词，此处much多余，故删除much。 ⑥在relies后加on　rely是不及物动词，其后常接on后再接宾语，rely on表示“依赖；依靠”，故在relies后加on。 ⑦are改为is　分析句子成分可知，本句中My grandmother's habit of reading newspapers作主语，其核心词为habit，为单数概念，谓语动词应用单数形式，故将are改为is。 ⑧especial改为especially　根据语境可知，此处