内容正文:
新高考英语作文应用文写作指导解读
例题:(2020,南京高二 )
假定你是李华,你的好友张林要抄袭你的作业,被你拒绝。你们为此都不开心。请给Life of Teens杂志编辑写一封邮件寻求帮助。内容包括:
1.简述写信事由;
2.寻求帮助。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
指导:写80词左右的应用文,很容易写成流水文,干巴巴的。我们如何让一篇要点简单的作文变得有血有肉,这就需要我们动点脑筋了。我的意见就是:因果逻辑拓展。高二学生一定要有列提纲的习惯,否则会不断涂改,非常不好。 下面我写的这篇90词的作文用词简单,但是各种句型交错使用,长短句结合。写作的目的是什么?无非就是让读者的阅读体验非常舒适。(孙三五)
提纲:
要点1:抄袭作业(copy homework)--》beyond his ability; play computer games; not prepare the lesson well; too much homework, no time
要点2:拒绝:honesty comes first; violate school rules;(结果)not speak to each other
要点3:seek for help
成文:
Dear the editor,
I am writing to ask you for help about how to mend my broken friendship.
Last Friday, not having prepared his homework well, Zhanglin, my close friend, wanted to copy my homework, to whom I responded with a definite refusal. In my belief, it is honesty that comes first and such behavior undoubtedly went against school rules. Unfortunately, a cold war followed. Since then never have we spoken to each other and conflicts aros