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模块同步写作指导 【模块写作目标】 如何写好以学校生活为话题的书面表达 本模块的书面表达内容是与学校生活相关的话 题,这类文章主要是向人们介绍自己学校的生活,抒 发自己对学校的直观感受等。在写作的过程中应该 根据所给的要点和词汇,全面地、有层次地进行介绍, 这样能够使文章的内容充实饱满。 亮点素材】 (一)词汇 1. be glad to 2. have a better school life 3. open our minds 4. such as sports club 5. make our life more colourful as for 7. be more interested in doin 8. what's more (二)句子 1. Im very glad to write a letter to you 2. Here are some of my suggestions 3. They make our life more colourful 4. As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting 5. We will be more interested in studying and have more time to practise 6. What's more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time 7. I hope my suggestions will be helpful 写作模板】 1. Here are some of 2. First. i hope our school will 3. They make our life 4. And i suggest our school 5. as for 6.What’ s more. 7. i hope my suggestions will 【典例剖析】 假如你是Tony,为了使初中的学校生活更加有意 义,请你提几点建议。请用书信的形式向校长反馈意见。 要求:1.中心突出,语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范; 2.词数80左右。 (一)范文展示 Dear headmaster Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some my suggestions First, I hope our school will open the library more often because the books can open our minds. Second, I think our school can organise more after-class activities, such as sports club. Third. i hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. They make our life more colourfu As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practise. What's more I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter Y ours Tony )名师点评 本文给学校的几处日常活动提出建议,整体思路 清晰,行文连贯,单词、句型运用恰当,书信格式正确 Fist以及后面使用的序数词使文章更加有条理。使 用 I hope..句型,表达更加委婉。 open our minds短语 运用恰当。 I think使用宾语从句使句意表达错落有 致。Andi使用条件状语从句,句意表达清晰有序。 “ I hope my suggestion