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模块同步写作指导 模块写作目标 如何写好以旅游为主的书面表达 旅游类的写作属于记叙文。就是将自己在游览 过程中的所见、所闻和所想记录下来。这类文章主要 是向人们介绍风光景点、名胜古迹、风土人情等,抒发 自己参观游览的体验感受。在记叙的过程中应该多 注意对景点本身的描述,如其历史、地理位置、景色 这样能够使文章的内容充实饱满 【亮点素材】 (一)词汇 1. an unforgettable thing neir others 3. go to the great Wall for a trip 4. get off 5. be knocked down 6. badly hurt 7. at that moment 8. get into trouble 9. more and more (二)句子 1. This thing teaches me to help others 2.I saw an old woman was knocked down onto the ground y a car 3. At that moment, there were many people waiting around but nobody dared to help her 4. Although the cleaner is common and doesnt have a valuable job. he isnt afraid to get into trouble but to be rea dy to help others 5. I was moved deeply by him 写作模板 1. I will never forget.. and this thing 2. Last summer holiday i went 3. When we got off... She was badly 4. At that moment. there were 5. Suddenly, a cleaner. Although the cleaner 6. I was moved deeply 7. Though.. there are 8.i think as a student i should 【典例剖析】 在我们的假期旅行中,会碰到各种各样的事情。 定有很多令我们难忘的事情,那么最令你难忘的事 是什么呢?请以“ An Unforgettable Thing in Travel ling”为题写一篇英语短文和大家共同分享。 要求:1.中心突出,语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范; 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名 3.词数80左右。 (一)范文展示 An Unforgettable Thing in Travelling I will never forget the cleaner who helps the old woman, and this thing teaches me to help others Last summer holiday i went to the Great Wall for a trip with my parents. When we got off the train, I saw an old woman was knocked down onto the ground by a car She was badly hurt. At that moment, there were many people waiting around, but nobody dared to help her Suddenly, a cleaner came over to her and took her to the nearest hospital. Although the cleaner is common and loesn't have a valuable job, he isnt afraid to get into trouble but to be ready to help others I was moved deeply by him. Though more and more terrible things happen in this situation here are more helpful people in our life. I think as a student, I should learn from him (二)名师点评 文章行文流畅,意思连贯,内容完整。单词、句型 运用恰当。以定语从句引出事件的主题“帮助老妇人 的清洁工”,奠定文章的核心思想“帮助他