内容正文:
读后续写教学策略探究
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课例赏析
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A Wise Deer
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A Cowardly Tiger
浙江省十校联盟2019年10月高三联考读后续写
富阳中学 王璐
Analysis of the text
Literary genre (文体):
Fable 寓言故事
Features (特征):
Tell a short story using simple words and sentences, from which you can learn a lesson.
The character can be a person or an animal.
续写材料的文体和文体特征
关注1:
小说、 童话、寓言、故事
语言特征
语言的协同性
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1. 关注语篇整体语言表达
2. 关注文中主要时态和语态
3. 分析文中句式特点
4. 仔细研读各类描写
5. 关注修辞
策略1:
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策略1:
语言表达:
主要时态和语态:
主要句式摘记:
各类描写:
修辞:
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策略1:
语言表达:
语言简洁,表达不复杂(简单句较多);含一些对话;故事叙述
主要时态和语态:
一般过去时;主动语态
主要句式摘记:
The deer was frightened because ...(原状从)
Fortunately, the tiger was not ... (adv, + 句子)
The deer was trying to ... when she heard ...(时状从)
④ The cunning jackal was now sure the tigher was ....(宾从)
各类描写:
动作:The young ones wandered haply here and there.
心理:The deer was frieghtened ...
环境: There were bones of dead animals all over the cave.
......
修辞: 拟人(把动物当作人来描写,赋予有生命的动物以人的禀性,使之像人一样地说话,行动,有思想,有感情。)
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Who
Where
Task I: Read for plots
Mother deer