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1.文本内容与结构解读
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主题: The smart clothes and its application
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1.文本内容与结构解读
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British shoppers buy 2.15 million tons of clothing and shoes annually, yet UK citizens have an estimated £30 billion worth of unused clothing at the back of the wardrobe. But new technology could see the end of that, with the garments(衣服)themselves reminding the owners of their existence.
“Smart clothes” could help us clear out our wardrobes(衣柜)by sending messages or tweeting(发推文)us if they haven’t been worn for a good while. If these messages are ignored, the garments will get in touch with a clothing charity and ask to be reused, with an organization automatically sending out donation information. They could be programmed for a public sale where they are sold to whoever offers the highest price on eBay.
Academics at Birmingham City University are developing the “connected wardrobe” to encourage more suitable clothes consumption. The concept sees garments tagged, using washable contactless technology.
Mark Brill, senior lecturer at the university, said, “Think of the surprise when an owner suddenly receives bids for items that they didn’t know were in their wardrobe.” “The connected wardrobe is a practical pleasant concept to encourage people to think about their clothing consumption. Finally, I hope it will encourage more appropriate fashion consumption,” he added. “Perhaps we can even move away from the idea of ‘ownership’ of clothing. When we’ve worn them enough, the items will pass themselves on to their next keeper.”
It follows in the footsteps of the “Internet of Things” --a concept that sees ordinary household items connecting to the Internet in order to share information. Now, the “Internet of Clothes” will see that neglected garments will tweet and text the owners, “asking” to be worn dependin