【暑期特惠11】概要写作1.15 A Race Against Death -Lyx（课件）-高考英语作文新题型

概要写作 文本内容与结构解读 写作思路解读 写作思路微技能之主题词策略 表达微技能之高度概括篇 牛刀小试 参考范文欣赏 体裁：记叙文 主题： a deadly infectious disease 结构： Para 1 Para 4 Para 2&3 Para 6 Para 5 1.文本内容与结构解读 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 On the 20th of January 1925 in Nome, North Alaska, Dr. Welch diagnosed a Sick boy, Billy, with diphtheria, a deadly infectious (传染的) disease mainly affecting children. The children of Nome would be helpless if it hit the town. Dr. Welch needed medicine as soon as possible to prevent the sickness from spreading. However, the closest supply was over 1,000 miles away. What’s worse, the town was cut off from the outside world a heavy snow --- the medicine seemed impossible. By January 26, Billy and three other children had died. Twenty more were sick. Nome’s town officials came up with a plan. They would sent the medicine by train to Nenana. From there, dogsled (狗拉雪橇) drivers — known as “mushers” — would carry it to Nome in a relay (接力). The race began on January 27. The first musher, Shannon, picked up the medicine from the train at Nenana and rode all night. His face was black from the extreme cold. ② ③ ① 要把握好记叙文的文章脉络必须掌握好记叙文的六个要素：时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果。 On January 31, a musher named Seppala had to cross a frozen body of water called Norton Sound. It was the most dangerous part of the journey. Norton Sound was covered with ice, which could break up without warning. If that happened, Seppala might fall into the icy water below. He and the sick children would all die. But Seppala made it across. A huge snowstorm hit on February1. A musher named Kaasen had to brave this storm. At one point, huge piles of snow blocked his way. He had to leave the trail to get around them. Conditions were so bad that it was impossible for him to find the trail again. The only hope was Kaasen’s lead dog. The dog put his nose to the ground, trying to find the smell of other dogs that had traveled on the trail. If Balto failed, it would mean disaster for Nome. Minutes later, the dog finally found