2019届高三英语二轮复习---写作技巧训练教学课件共32张PPT含练习 (2份打包)

写作技巧训练 利用句子的多样化表达提高作文语言质量 What activity was it? We arrived at the world park at 9 o’clock. We were divided into 5 groups. Then We enjoyed the beautiful scenery. We talked and laughed. We saw some models of buildings. The buildings were famous in other countries. We took some photos. It was a wonderful day. Our trip to the Beijing World Park 新课标中的写作评价标准: (节选) The shortcoming of the sample passage: 语法结构和句型单调 第五档(18-20) 语言结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富 第四档（15-17） 使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇 第三档（12-14） 应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务要求 第二档（6-11) 语法结构单调、词汇未能满足表达要求 简单句的特点： 强劲有力，干净利落，意思特别清楚。 常用来提出论点，得出结论，或提出主要事实。 句子的适当扩展不仅可以增大句子的信息量，而且可以收到一定的修饰效果。 Learning Goals Through exercises, cooperation, questioning and comments, we will be able to: sum up the ways and skills of improving the language expression in writing and feel the benefits that they brings to us in writing. use the skills consciously, properly and correctly to combine sentences and rewrite the sentences, paragraph and passage. feel the happiness of helping others and learn “Practice makes perfect.” Making comments on Papers Excellent group： Group 3　and　group 4 Excellent members：秀瑞雪, 齐恺欣，于可心，高子越，隋振杰 need to improve：２－４，５－４，７－４ 3. He left out the question. 2. His handwriting should be improved! 1. Part 2 Task 3 审题不清Careless Yesterday once more Careful Clear Part 1 Self-study----Correcting Mistakes You could Correct your mistakes by yourself or by cooperating with your partners. （2mins） Tips： 1、Prepare color pens and papers 2、In order to solve the difficulties, you should devote yourselves to the discussion. 3、重点讨论task 4,sum up the characteristics of the language in sample 2，仔细看范文2，总结的更全面些，结合例子. Last week, our class organized a spring outing. To make this memorable activity more wonderful, we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain climbing instead of other choices like playing in an amusement park and going boating. With high spirits,