内容正文:
第二节 分类突破
一、审题谋篇的4大要素
(2016·江苏)
请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。[来源:学#科#网Z#X#X#K]
In recent years,internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast on-line votes themselves,but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”.
Li Jiang,a high school student,is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition,organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work.Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories.He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds.He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” competition.He has already received three similar invitations this week.His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition,the family will win an overseas tour for free.Su Hua likes his cousin very much,but he finds other singers perform even better.To vote,or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
写作内容
1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;
2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
写作要求
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
评分标准[来源:学,科,网Z,X,X,K]
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
考场思维模式
(一)审题:
定体裁
读写任务类——议论文,本文是对网络投票的利与弊进行讨论。
定人称[来源:Zxxk.Com]
第一人称
定时态
一般现在时
定结构
开头:用约30个单词写出上文概要;
主体:阐述对网络投票的看法;
结尾:说明自己的观点。
(二)谋篇:[来源:学#科#网Z#X#X#K]
1.阅读短文,抓住内容要点
根据写作内容和写作要求可以列出以下三个要点:
(1)写出文章的概要;
(2)发表支持或反对网络投票的观点;
(3)概括观点,得出结论。
2.概括大意,转述作者观点
本文为“对比观点式”议论文,写作时要从正反两个方面入手。以支持该观点为例,可以写出下列概要:
描述现象:With the rapid development of the Internet,online voting has been gaining popularity.
陈述观点:Online voting may indeed offer people more opportunities to participate in a variety of social activities without expending too much effort.[来源:学科网ZXXK]
3.顺承过渡,引出自己观点
根据概要写出过渡性语句,引出自己的观点:
From my own perspective,online voting should be treated rationally.
4.详写例证,论证自己观点
用2~3个理由或论据论证自己的观点。
5.得出结论,注意前后呼应
对观点进行论证之后,进一步概括归纳自己的观点,升华主题,并照应开头。
6.修饰润色,使其锦上添花
7.誊答案
英语书面