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六、读写任务类—— 说明文 典例 请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 1.The other day，a netizen(网民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo.It was about an old lady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle lane，and insisting that it leave the track.The photo drew about 7,000 comments on the social media platform.Despite the thumbs-up(点赞) given to the old lady，some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic.[来源:学科网ZXXK] 2.Some riders of e-bikes and bicycles come and go in all directions，ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles.Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic.Thus the avoidable road accidents become unavoidable. [来源:学§科§网] 写作内容 1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容； 2.结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因； 3.根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。 评分标准 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 满分作文 The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack.It not only affects our everyday life，but may also threaten people’s lives.The three selections presented above are typical examples. Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways，there is still much room for improvement，because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.What’s worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules. In fact，traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.Without them，people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society.It is the people who obey the rules that matter.It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. 阅卷老师点评[来源:学#科#网Z#X#X#K] 1.本文在高级词汇的使用，过渡词句的运用，以及句式结构的多样化等方面做得非常到位。要点齐全，层次分明，过渡自然，结构紧凑。 2.范文严格按照“三步走”的格局：第一段用30词(不含标点)概括了所给材料，得益于使用了not only...but also...这一经典句型。 第二段分析了导致交通问题的原因，使用了give rise to，large-scale construction of，the increasing number of，(be) vital to等高级词汇，同时what’s worse衔接词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。 3.第三段句型多样，使用了without虚拟语气，it is...that...强调句型，it is on