专题01 提升作文档次的技巧-让文章靓丽起来-【步步高】高考英语考前冲刺之书面表达集训（天津）

第1节　提升作文档次的技巧——让文章靓丽起来 一、增加细节的5大策略 在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给的条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是对图片内容轻描淡写，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、字数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。 1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明 (1)我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境和拯救地球。 We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. →We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example，we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic ones，refuse to use single-use products，plant more trees and save water and energy. (2)我要花一些时间和父母在一起。 I’ll spend some time staying with my parents. →I’ll spend some time staying with my parents，chatting with them and doing some housework. (3)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。 I’d like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. →I’d like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible，we can travel together or share traveling experiences. (4)我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。 I’m a healthy boy full of energy so I like sports very much. →I’m a healthy boy full of energy so I like sports very much，especially outdoor activities.Whenever I have time，I’ll go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates. 题组过关1　根据括号内提示完成句子 1.The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.We can not only read news from home and abroad(我们不仅仅能阅读国内外的新闻)，but also get information，send emails and attend on-line schools. 2.Laura is a standard American style.She speaks perfect American English(她说一口完美的美式英语)，and that’s why I am crazy about her. 3.However，it seems people are unaware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication.For example，many people begin to pay less attention to face-to-face communication(比如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流). 4.However，every coin has two sides，so does the Internet.For example，being lost in the Internet may affect our study and work(比如，沉溺于因特网也许会影响我们的学习和工作). 2.增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容 (1)我有时去村西的小河游泳。 I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then. →I went swimmi