内容正文:
英语书面表达
专题复习
学习目标
1. Learn the base ways to form a composition.
学会基础写作的方法、步骤。
2. Learn some tips about how to make a composition better.
学会改进文章的几点技巧。
“一点”: 有“亮点”。有独到之处。
“二整”: 书写工整,卷面整洁。
“三要”: 数量要达标,词汇和语法结构 要准确、上下文要连贯。
“四不行”: 漏掉内容不行,写错体不行,用错人称不行,用错时态不行。
What is a good composition?
brainstorm
Teenagers’
colorful life
We study .
We like listening
to music.
We play
computer games for long.
We like reading
books.
We often play
Sports.
We go to KFC .
Sometimes we travel.
Sometimes we
stay up studying.
Teenagers’
healthy life
We study all day.
We like listening
to music.
We play
computer games for long.
We like reading
books.
We often play
Sports.
We go to KFC.
Sometimes we travel.
Sometimes we
stay up studying.
认真审题,明确文章的体裁、人称、时态、提示和要求。
写作第一步
审
具体做法:用笔勾画或写下
——1、体裁 2、人称 3、时态
4、提示 5、要求
健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天,会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢?国际健康组织对此作了一次调查,右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息,请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。
审
travel
stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
1、体裁:
Thinking
调查报告
2、人称:
“人们” “大家”-----第三人称
3、时态:
一般现在时
4、提示:
如何渡过假期,提倡假日休闲
5、要求:
根据图表信息写作,并提出倡议。
用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。
列
写作第二步
根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点
如何度假
调查报告
倡议假日休闲
stay at home
work
visit friends or parents
travel
Enjoy your vacation.
列
A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.
加
加首尾,使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁,漂亮。
写作第三步:
文章结构
1.Heading
点题,概括性
2.Body
中心记述部分;层次分明
3.Ending
小结,呼应主题
A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.
How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
a nice head
a nice tail
a nice body
How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends o