内容正文:
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I’m the last part of your English test paper,
I play a very important role,
I own one sixth of the whole scores,
I’m extremely strict with you.
I like perfect grammar and few mistakes,
I like tidiness and neatness.
Who am I ? ---
A Riddle
Lead-in
I am writing
记叙文
Narrative Writing
议论文
Argumentative Writing
说明文
Expository Writing
应用文
Practical Writing
Practice & Assessment of E-mail Writing
授课人:高岚
Discussion
What should we take into consideration about writing an e-mail?
Before writing
假设你是李华,刚参加了在为中学生举行的为期一周的关于各国传统文化交流的冬令营活动,请你给组织者写一封邮件表达感谢之意,并请他帮忙寄回你忘记带回的数码相机。
要点如下:1. 对交流活动的感受 ; 2. 有关相机的信息及重要性 ; 3.表示感谢 。
注意:1. 词数 100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯
While writing
Your task
Assessment
What should we take into consideration about good writing?
Discussion
ASSESSMENT
structure Is the article divided into parts?
Does each part have a topic sentence?
content Are all the details stated?
Is everything to the point(切题)?
Language Are there any mistakes?
Is there any advanced vocabulary?
Are there any good sentence patterns(句式)?
Does the writer use any linking words?
Let’s improve it:
ASSESSMENT
structure Is the article divided into parts?
Does each part have a topic sentence?
If not, come up with one.
Let’s improve it:
content Are all the details stated?
If not, add the missing details.
Is everything to the point(切题)?
Let’s improve it:
Language Are there any mistakes?
If yes, correct them.
Is there any advanced vocabulary
(高级词汇)?
If not, add some.
Are there any good sentence patterns(句式)?
If yes, underline them.
Does the writer use any linking words?
If not, add some.
Assessment
structure Is the article divided into parts?
Does each part have a topic sentence?
content Are all the details stated?
Is everything to the point(切题)?
Language Are there any mistakes?
Is there any advanced vocabulary?
Are there any good sentence patterns(句式)?
Does the writer use any linking words?
homework
Please improve your