内容正文:
Lost and Found
By Elaina Satti
When
Where
Who Action/appearance Your comment
Reaction/appearance Your comment
What
during the class
in the classroom
Jonathan
Miss
Anderson
Jonathan’s imagination is lost
When
Where
Who Action/Appearance/Attitude Your comment
during the class
in the classroom
Jonathan
The gum cracking became louder.
...cracking his gum…obnoxious way
The gum cracking became even louder.
class clown, naughty, trouble-maker,
impolite,
have no respect for his teacher, lose his interest in study…
…slowly raised his hand
…he answered slowly
…he answered casually
…throw a triumphant glance at no one in particular and cracked his gum with satisfaction
Tip1: To show not to tell. Appearance, Action and Attitude can show the reader what kind of person he/she is.
Your comment
Miss
Anderson
She st