内容正文:
Continuation writing based on mind maps
when
where
who
what
how
why
A story
Elements of a story
Jane
One weekend in July
After she climbed to …
As the night began to fall
At the break of the day
As she picked her way
A few minutes later
a lake in the forest
Camp overnight/quarrel /walked away
angry
no path to follow/ forest far beyond
saw nothing/lost
helpless
In the dark
stop for the night
regretful
water trickling at the distance/ sound to the stream
saw/drank/ taste berries
stronger
The trees …impossible to see her
heard a helicopter
happy/excited/ upset
another helicopter/open area
flag yellow blouse
hopeful
Jane Tom lake walked climbed at a distance stream to her great joy helicopter yellow blouse
Divide the underlined words into different elements
Para. 7:
But no more helicopte