内容正文:
第12讲 应用文的写作
一、电子邮件
(2017·全国Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.内容:学习唐诗;
3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题的要求是写一封电子邮件。电子邮件和书信写法和格式大体相同,但也有不同之处。一般由五部分组成:(1)标题栏;(2)称呼语;(3)正文;(4)结尾客套语;(5)落款。
电子邮件的正文部分和一般书信的要求一样。高考中一般只考查电子邮件正文部分的写作。
本题要求考生以李华的身份写一封电子邮件告知正在学习汉语的英国朋友Leslie下次上课的计划。可分为三段来写:
第一段:表达问候,说明写信的目的——详细告诉一些事情。
第二段:介绍下次上课的时间和地点;内容是学习唐诗;需要做的课前准备是简要了解唐朝的历史。
第三段:希望早点收到回复。
修订提升
Dear Leslie,
How is everything getting along with you?I’m writing to tell you something in detail.
To start with,I intend to stress that we are about to start our next lesson in Classroom 8 of the Teaching Building at 10 am next Friday.(用what引导的名词性从句改写:1.To start
with,what I intend to stress is that we are about to start our next lesson in Classroom 8 of the
Teaching Building at 10 am next Friday.)(添加过渡性词语:2.What’s more/Besides/In addition
/Moreover),in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture,it is of importance for you to be aware of the content,Tang poetry.There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance and it will make the class go smoothly.(用含which引导的定语从句的复合句改写:3.There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the
history of the Tang Dynasty in advance,which will make the class go smoothly.)
I’ll appreciate it if you can reply to my letter at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
即时训练
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter正在一家孔子学院学习汉语和中国文化,得知中国人很重视家风传承。他在给你的电子邮件中提到很想了解你的家风以及家风对你的影响。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:家风family spirits
参考范文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know you are learning Chinese language and culture.In your last letter,you said you wanted to know something about my family spirits.Here I’m writing to share something about my family with you.
There are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family.My parents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty,bravery and diligence and they set good examples for me and my brother.