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2019届二轮复习书面表达推荐信写作指导例析
假设你是李华,计划今年暑假去美国旅游两周,请给你的美国朋友David写一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:
1.提出你对旅游地点的要求并请David推荐地点;
2.你对住宿和交通的要求;
3.请他代为预订宾馆并对他表示感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
[四步写作]
一、定人称、定时态,审题快而不偏
人称以第一人称为主,主要时态用一般现在时
二、列提纲、准写词,要点全而不漏
1.简短的寒暄和导入
①暑假 the_summer_holiday
②临近 draw_near
2.提出你对旅游景点的要求
①出国旅行 travel_abroad
②美丽的风景 scenic_beauty
③自然美 the_beauty_of_nature
3.请David推荐地点
推荐 recommend
4.你对住宿和交通的要求
①住在宾馆 live_in_the_hotel
②周围的交通 the_traffic_around
③租车 rent_a_car
5.请David代为预订宾馆并对他表示感谢
①预订宾馆 book_a_hotel
②多谢 thanks_a_lot
三、由词汇、组成句,表达亮而不俗
1.一想到假期里要去美国旅游我感到很兴奋。
I feel very excited at the thought that I am going to visit America in the holiday.
2.对我来说,这是第一次独自出国旅行,所以我需要你的帮助。
It’s the first time for me to travel abroad on my own, so I need your help.
3.我想游览一些有美景的地区,如高山、峡谷、河流和森林,在那里我可以享受大自然的美。
I’d like to visit some areas of scenic beauty, such as mountains, valleys, rivers and forests, where I could enjoy the beauty of nature.
4.我更喜欢住在宾馆,我希望周围的交通不太拥挤,因为我要租一辆车开始我的旅行。
I prefer to live in the hotel and I hope the traffic around isn’t too heavy because I’m going to rent a car to start my travel.
5.请帮我预订一个宾馆。
Please help me book a hotel.
四、衔接词、巧串联,佳作顺而不乱
用适当的衔接词串句成文
Dear David,
The summer holiday is drawing near. I feel very excited at the thought that I am going to visit America in the holiday. It’s the first time for me to travel abroad on my own, so I need your help. I’d like to visit some areas of scenic beauty, such as mountains, valleys, rivers and forests, where I could enjoy the beauty of nature. Please recommend several places to me. Besides, I prefer to live in the hotel and I hope the traffic around isn